newschool099: CATW # 5: " In the article ' How to do One Thing at a Time' by Nancy Jones in Women's health magazine, the author begins to explain that a lar..."
I feel that you had a clear responce to the article you wrote about and you summarized it well. You had a good claim that agrees with the author and also states your own. I feel your essay has a good structured order. When it comes to Language you did ok but you could do better, your sentences and word choice can cause you to lose points if you don't work on it. And the same goes for your grammar and mechanics. My opinion overall is that you did a great job and this essay is a definite pass if you ask me.
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